Coldness

the carpet is cold
smushy between my thin toes
window left open
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Well written dear poet.
Rhinem Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 10:29 AM
Smile ˜ Tid bits of something or another but, vain the mirrors muse ˜ Love it, Always, John!:) ˜
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