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Cold Words

I only experienced snow by your cold words ... Snow, ice, freddo ... Frozen world, that you threw me ... If you were made of snow it would not be abnormal but you would not freeze my soul and would not put it on glacial state of life... !

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 7/6/2019 1:22:00 AM

Glacial life support would be horrible Alkas, but this poem is compelling. I read I read what the writer has written, but I also try to some how feel how I fit in; so often sparks of my own are triggered by the writer. I have often said and expressed in my poetry my true mi Musa. The poet's breath. Mine is real. She lives in Colombia, South America and has never seen snow. Kniwing this was not your intent in this poem, but with her I feel cold will someday be warmth. I love your lines Alkas

Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/10/2019 7:18:00 AM

Minha Musa, mi Musa, my Muse , attracted me as dazzling Muse,but shocked me as Witch... i am from hot side of the world, she from the cold side...When together my heat heated her, when we left each other, her cold made me glacial... But i loved her, i still think of her... salute my friend, alkas