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Cold Wind Blows

As the cold wind blows i feel alone, is it only me that wonders if i can keep going on, was i told as a child i'm not alone, is it only me that questions what keeps going wrong, this must be lesson for that i'm not wrong, for that my sin is way to strong, that is why I feel so cold when the wind blows i know I'll always know love is what I got to show.

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Date: 5/1/2019 2:54:00 PM
I like how its in a prose structure rather than the traditional form of poetry. And I like how you used the rhyming as well. Really good poem
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Date: 5/1/2019 2:18:00 PM
Very heartfelt write
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Date: 5/1/2019 10:07:00 AM
Hi Joshua, Welcome to Poetry soup!! I enjoyed your creativity!! Well done.. A melancholy poem! Look forward to reading more of your poems..
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Date: 5/1/2019 3:11:00 AM
the wind and the rain were and always will remain my strength...guilt begins early...but, early on the grace of a hurricane made stormy weather my personal retreat...there-in a retreat : )
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Date: 4/30/2019 8:57:00 PM
It's a sad poem, Josh, but a good one. The summer always comes back around, keep that in mind while you're shivering in spring :)
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Joshua Plourde
Date: 4/30/2019 9:02:00 PM
lol thank you yes must have to keep that in mind

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