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Cold Showers

The stem gets weak and the leaves get thin, There is no chance that it could win. Miracle grow wouldn't even help it stand tall, I am unstoppable everyone shall fall. Being defeated is not my game, I defeat them causing much pain. Supporters for this frail dim flower? Can't be they must be here for the showers. Why am I shrinking and getting so weak? The water was nice, but its tasted kind of sweet. The flower regains its strength and power each day, I am no longer a fighter, I become stray. Cancer cannot stand a chance, If people take one more glance. Defeated once again by a pool of sunflowers, Was it because of the rain or the cold showers? The steam gets weak and the leaves get thin, There is no chance that I can win.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/4/2010 10:31:00 PM
Another great poem, really deep.
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Date: 7/3/2010 5:57:00 PM
deep words you have here,, but keep your head up:)...P.D.
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Date: 7/3/2010 5:52:00 PM
... & this is, simply, a good write ... keep fit! Canny
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