Cold Outside

The crisp blue sky, clouds as white as snow.
The leafs no more, a little red robin perched on a branch.

It's cold outside
I freeze
I freeze
it's cold outside bring me into the warm.

Icy pavements, frosted cars
the sunshine threw is it deceiving me?

It's cold outside 
I freeze
I freeze
it's cold outside bring me into the warm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Ehigiator Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 4:28 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poetry being featured this week.God bless*Tyesha
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January 22, 2009 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations Yasmin on your poem being featured. Vince
Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Yasmin - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
Moreno Avatar
January 21, 2009 at 3:25 PM
Congrats on your feature of the week...Raul
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January 21, 2009 at 1:54 PM
It's definitely winter in North Dakota so I can relate to this one. Congratulations on being featured this week. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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January 19, 2009 at 4:19 PM
congrats in your poetry being featured thid week!**Maryam*
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January 19, 2009 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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January 19, 2009 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
Heck Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 9:49 AM
Yasmin - Welcome to Poetry Soup! Wishing you a Happy and Joyous New Year! Peace always, John
L Avatar
December 26, 2008 at 5:46 AM
great poem just for the season
Jordan Avatar
December 24, 2008 at 12:49 PM
Yasmin its winter bro - guess I'm lucky my wife makes a wonderful heater - Welcome to the soup - Merry Christmas and God Bless, MJ
Moreno Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 2:08 PM
Nice poem, welcome to poetry soup and Happyy Holidays...Raul
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