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Cold October Nite

The trees sway back and forth And the last of the green summer leaves wave to and fro. They wave as if to say goodbye to a season passed And getting ready to fall and wither away-- Leaving its branches bare and naked. They are getting ready for a cold winter ahead. The clouds paint the sky with its silver rain clouds, Covering what was the dark blue night behind it. A breeze sways by giving you a chill and aching your body and bones. It chills my nose. The cool crisp breeze, I take in a deep breathe and sigh, AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!! How fresh the air is, How clean it smells, How good it feels- Even in its coldness. This nice,quiet, Cold October night. Alicia Griego 10/04/06

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Date: 6/26/2012 5:57:00 AM
I am enjoying reading your poetry this morning Alicia. Love, Carol
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