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Cold N Heartless

They say im cold and im heartless So not the case. I'm feeling lonely and helpless So out of place. Best friends with pain No stranger to hard times, If only you could see What goes on inside my mind. The love that I possess Is so hard to bear It eats right through me I can feel it bite and tear. If only I had a chance Just one To let it out, Finally you'd see What this man is all about.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/30/2009 6:51:00 AM
Here it is Sunday and the begining of a new week is upon us. And August is leaving us way to soon. I am enjoying reading such excellent poems today and am happy to see your poetry among them Saq. May your pen forever flow. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2009 4:30:00 AM
Nicely put to describe what that hurt person is feeling inside. Keep writing. Sara
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