Cold N Heartless

They say im cold and im heartless
So not the case.
I'm feeling lonely and helpless
So out of place.
Best friends with pain
No stranger to hard times,
If only you could see
What goes on inside my mind.
The love that I possess
Is so hard to bear
It eats right through me
I can feel it bite and tear.
If only I had a chance
Just one
To let it out,
Finally you'd see
What this man is all about.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
August 30, 2009 at 6:51 AM
Here it is Sunday and the begining of a new week is upon us. And August is leaving us way to soon. I am enjoying reading such excellent poems today and am happy to see your poetry among them Saq. May your pen forever flow. Love, Carol
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August 30, 2009 at 4:30 AM
Nicely put to describe what that hurt person is feeling inside. Keep writing. Sara
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