Nette Onclaud Poet Lyric

Cold Is the Gush

With downpour hued in starlit gray,
And fallen eyes are interlocked
In drizzles where the torrent bites
Till candles wane on a fabric soiled
Her boudoir cluttered by the wind,
Sighing a pitter-patter scream
And on a chair, her drooped spine curves,
Receding off so constantly
Limbs tip tap rhythm on the floor;
Alone, betrothed to lonely sheets

How cold the gush in Summer's flight.


Rain, Rain, Rain Contest of Francine Roberts
by nette onclaud
5/25/2013

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Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2013 at 6:16 PM boy, this one has a great tone, Nette. I love it.

Len Gasun May 30, 2013 at 10:01 AM Hi, my dear friend Nette! Hope you're doing fine! Well, hope we'll meet each other soon. About your poem, sad but soo beautiful one. So happy to read and comment on it once again and most especially seeing it on the winners' list. Not too many winners there but you did it so well! Big congratulations with big hugs! My hearty congrats also for your other awesome wins recently. I'm sorry if I seldom peek at soup 'cuz I'm super busy at school esp. this week. Again, thanks a lot! love lots, Leonora

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 30, 2013 at 9:43 AM Big congrats on your outstanding win. AO

Francine Roberts May 30, 2013 at 9:11 AM congrats on your 5th place win nette, lovely

Poet Tacito May 27, 2013 at 9:26 AM Another stunning piece. Let it rain...

S.Jagathsimhan Nair May 27, 2013 at 8:56 AM Lot of images float through the gush of this write! Interesting!!

Timothy Hicks May 25, 2013 at 11:28 PM Wow, so elegantly phrased this one! A lot of colorful and delicate images. I could be wrong with my interpretation, but I envision someone (male or female lover) leaving the bed out of no where... but the other knows they might not return.

Len Gasun May 25, 2013 at 10:15 PM A loneliness with so much beauty. Another very impressive write this is my dear friend Nette. If this is for the contest, a winner for sure! Thank you so much for sharing & your precious visits leaving me another wonderful comments. Well, hope to see you soon my dear friend. Take care and Have a blessed Sunday there! love lots, Leonora

Elai Cee May 25, 2013 at 7:28 PM Hi Nette! thanks for visiting my page. really i appreciate your comment. Your work is so wonderful, filled of great imagination.--God bless you---ELAI

Kash Poet May 25, 2013 at 7:25 PM Amazing poetry from you Nette!Love this very much.

Sara Kendrick May 25, 2013 at 4:54 PM Great work descriptive of the rain and its effect upon the human emotion..Enjoyed reading your work..It is unique and creative..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to comment..Sara

Russell Sivey May 25, 2013 at 4:31 PM Wow, the extreme power behind your glorious words here is outstanding, a tremendous staring look, through eyes of loneliness! You have written a breathtaking poem...one that inspired a poem directly after I read this one, a different feel than yours but still inspired from it! What a delightfully ingenious poem you have written here my friend! Such a grand piece, Awesome Work!!

Richard Lamoureux May 25, 2013 at 4:24 PM You are the master when it comes to describing nature. Well done.