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Cold Hearted

loved her so much, then a backlash I discovered this sore, irritating rash, I asked her what it could be She said no worries it’s just a std, No doubt in my mind, she’d cheated what do I do now, so harshly treated, I don’t like my personal life up for debate but I must ask advice from my best mate, Well mate she played you like a fiddle what you saw in her to me was a riddle, she was no good for you, we did all agree so get down the pub now mate, your free. 12/22/2017 Contest men your advise to another man on females Sponsored by Brenda Chiri.

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Date: 1/28/2018 9:12:00 PM
Friends always have your back Roy, too bad our hearts don't listen to them.. lol! A great poem with rhythmic flow and wonderful rhymes.. You need a drink after that bit of news - and a doc! :) Enjoyed.. Warmest wishes my friend ~Susan
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Date: 12/22/2017 10:00:00 AM
A ha! Nice one :) my best to you in the contest! xomo
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Roy Pett
Date: 12/22/2017 4:31:00 PM
Thanks Maureen, what would we do without mates? Thanks again for your best wishes. :))
Date: 12/22/2017 7:38:00 AM
A fun read Roy! Nothing can be done to mend this one. Pub sounds good..lager and lime!
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Date: 12/22/2017 4:26:00 PM
Thanks Vijay, pleased you liked this, the pub always sounds good to me too. :))

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