Cold Hearted

loved her so much, then a backlash 
I discovered this sore, irritating rash,
I asked her what it could be
She said no worries it’s just a std,

No doubt in my mind, she’d cheated
what do I do now, so harshly treated,
I don’t like  my personal life up for debate 
but I must ask advice from my best mate,

Well mate she played you like a fiddle
what you saw in her to me was a riddle,
she was no good for you, we did all agree 
so get down the pub now mate, your free.

12/22/2017
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Ashley Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Friends always have your back Roy, too bad our hearts don't listen to them.. lol! A great poem with rhythmic flow and wonderful rhymes.. You need a drink after that bit of news - and a doc! :) Enjoyed.. Warmest wishes my friend ~Susan
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December 22, 2017 at 10:00 AM
A ha! Nice one :) my best to you in the contest! xomo
Pett Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 4:31 PM
Thanks Maureen, what would we do without mates? Thanks again for your best wishes. :))
Pandit Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 7:38 AM
A fun read Roy! Nothing can be done to mend this one. Pub sounds good..lager and lime!
Pett Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 4:26 PM
Thanks Vijay, pleased you liked this, the pub always sounds good to me too. :))
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