Cold Feet!!!

Here i satnd outside your door with heart in hand ,
wedding ring and band ,hoping that you'll understand ,
that this lust once love is lost in thought again,
Can you comprehend that you are just a woman and I a mere man?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 24, 2009 at 1:40 PM
Bravo! Thrilling and straight to the point! Less is better I always say...but I can't seem to take my own advise and I get too wordy!~ But you...YOU sir are a natural...this is very well written. The flow and rhythm are in sync so well that it is an easy read for the reader....as well as relatable to everyone~ Splendid job Mr. C...take care ~ Janers
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