Cold Eyes

held down in a life of hateful crime , she no longer ask's why. 
her insides are torn apart , all these creatures can never be able to touch her heart. 
she lays cold with fear of the unknown on her steady rock of heavenly steel. 
breathless she can no longer fight what is within well her mind shattered. 
the one that always loved her (claimed her), did things to hold her tight knowing this angel girl would not put up a fight, as you see she never had those cruel things in her to began with. 
love is happy and free as if two spirits rideing happily in the summer cool breeze. 
she gave her heart , all he did was sit down tried to tear her apart. 
nothing left anymore as she lie's on her rock wings first , staring into his cold soulless eyes. 
gone never , really never felt more alive . as the clouds start to pour heavy rain she slowly fades away, nothing left there anymore . 
only those two souls will ever know what that journey was like , alone but cold never been into it long enough . 
she failed for his mind games at the end of the day, he took her pure warmth loving heart away . 
a beautiful rose shall fall tears of fear shall run down your face your heart shall be token too if this cold man ever laid his eyes on you , be brave and walk away from the cold creature in display .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/27/2018 2:34:00 AM
HI Ashley Rainwater hope you get some one with loving eyes for long.... your name is very nice " rainwater" the rain water if falls on eyes can make the eyes hot for you again.........i like your thoughts in this poem
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