Cold Deadly Dangers

Danger in the snow.
Icicles falling off lines.
Stabbing broken hearts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 19, 2010 at 8:25 AM
If already broken, wouldn't the icicle be thy savior??? Excellent, thought provoking Haiku friend.....:JP]
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January 18, 2010 at 8:34 PM
winter is sometimes the most brutal and emotionally taxing time of year. (for me at least) heartache just hurts more when the cold chills you to the bone. and i feel that in your haiku. thanks for the insight. -joe
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January 18, 2010 at 7:54 PM
Interesting thoughts for the reader to ponder about. Good use of imagery. Fitting title. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen
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