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Cold Days

Crunching under foot
Is the freshly fallen snow
     Muffling all sound

naturehaiku

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July 1, 2009 at 8:17 AM

Glad summer is finally here. We had way too much of that crunching stuff this past winter. Nice one! Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind words on my poem. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Mc Mc

December 31, 2008 at 3:09 AM

muffling sound- like it good Haiku, Matthew!!

December 22, 2008 at 12:45 PM

I like the sound imagery in this one. Interesting last line gave me pause of thought. We're supposed to get more snow here in North Dakota tomorrow. We already have more than enough. Nice use of just three lines. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Karen