Brandy Parker Poet Rhyme

Cold Concrete

Have you seen her?
In dreams I do see
A little girl lost
Within the cracks of cold concrete

She feels the weight upon her
That awful treading of life's feet
Consumed within their hardships
Those cracks begin to seep

A little girl lost no more
Lives forever in my dreams
Whispering haunting reminders
From within the cracks of cold 
concrete

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Kiera Trejo May 18, 2012 at 5:04 AM That is a beautiful poem

Carol Sunshine Brown May 18, 2012 at 4:22 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Brandy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Brandy Parker May 17, 2012 at 10:24 PM Thank you so much! Will be sure to read some of yours soon;-)

Pace Ink-U-Script May 17, 2012 at 5:37 AM Yikes..this is written nice!!! Love the "cold concrete.."...regards INK-U-SCRIPT