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Cold Concrete

Have you seen her? In dreams I do see A little girl lost Within the cracks of cold concrete She feels the weight upon her That awful treading of life's feet Consumed within their hardships Those cracks begin to seep A little girl lost no more Lives forever in my dreams Whispering haunting reminders From within the cracks of cold concrete

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Kiera Trejo

Date: 5/18/2012 5:04:00 AM

That is a beautiful poem

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2012 4:22:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Brandy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Brandy Parker

Date: 5/17/2012 10:24:00 PM

Thank you so much! Will be sure to read some of yours soon;-)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/17/2012 5:37:00 AM

Yikes..this is written nice!!! Love the "cold concrete.."...regards INK-U-SCRIPT