Cold Chilled Air

The chilling snow is falling down on me
I freeze in the frigid cold air
Coldness blocks any thoughts

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Brian Strand's "Triplet" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2011 at 8:28 PM
Hey, I really like the feeling of this one. A belated Congrats to you on your HM.
Merryman Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 3:23 PM
Congrats on your HM, Russell! Kim
Williams Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:06 PM
Russell congrats on your win, gave me warmth did this..David
Long Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 11:46 AM
congrats on your win cory
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Triplet" contest Russell. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Very nice Kimo Russell.Congrats on your win.
Wesley Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 4:36 PM
Yes, the hair stands up on my arms just thinking about it. Wouldn't be too bad if it didn't last so long.
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December 5, 2011 at 3:48 PM
Very nice Kimo form... well done my friend,... Michael
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December 4, 2011 at 8:30 PM
Russell, splendid idea... but, the thought is to cold to imagine..lol..I'm from Texas, and you know we are scared of the cold.. we are like babies.... good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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