Cold and Light

God's work in progress
snow covered caps hit with light
the beauty of cold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Horsman Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 8:37 PM
hi brandee thanks for your comments, i'm new and still woking my way through many of the poems on this site. this haiku really stands out, it's beautiful harry
K. Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 6:52 AM
The contrast you mention here is very effective, it's so nice to s e the beauty in everything...thanks for this uplifting haiku :)
Owens Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Beautiful Haiku and congratulations on placing in the contest...love your last line...Marty
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February 18, 2010 at 4:38 AM
Congratulations Brandee, on your placement in Raul’s “Sunrise” haiku contest. God gives wonderful gifts. How joyful it must be to Him when He is recognized. Your poem is beautiful. I can see why you are in the winners circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann
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February 16, 2010 at 3:11 AM
Lots of truth in your last line Brandee.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Haick Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 8:27 PM
My congratulations, Brandee, on your win in the contest! Great work. Peace, Audrey
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February 13, 2010 at 8:29 AM
What an inspirational view! Blessings to you for sharing it with us. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor! Keep on writing. Karen
Brown Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 6:58 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Sunrise contest Brandee. Love, Carol
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February 13, 2010 at 6:01 AM
Congrats Brandee on your winning poem in the Sunrise contest.. a beautiful Haiku as I commented previously .. enjoy your victorious moment.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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February 12, 2010 at 10:30 PM
Brandee, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
Sweetheart Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 8:19 PM
Great Haiku Brandee .. if for Raul's contest entry good luck .. luv your title ... your words are dynamic too.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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