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Cold and Hot

Cold Slowly swept in after the rain danced in glee; Pleasure streaks erupted as her lips kissed mine Hot Won first Place in STRAND POETRY PICK 2,Any theme,any form Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/8/2020 6:11:00 AM

Wow, love this. A deserving win indeed. Hugs

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/8/2020 7:21:00 AM

Thank you Cecilia..Takecare..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/7/2020 4:09:00 AM

A stunning contrast! Superb writing dearest , Jenish! Hugs xxx Take care!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/8/2020 1:15:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios.. Stay safe..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/6/2020 7:41:00 PM

Masterfully penned, Jenish. An all-time FAVE for me. Congrats! Blessings, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/6/2020 10:46:00 PM

Wow.. My friend, hugs.. Sorry.. Poetic hugs.. Thank you..

Sandra Adams

Date: 4/6/2020 7:24:00 PM

love this... brilliantly penned... congratulations on your win... stay safe, hugs and blessings!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/6/2020 10:44:00 PM

Thank you Sandra for this delightful words.. Takecare..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 4/6/2020 7:02:00 PM

WOW!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/6/2020 10:43:00 PM

Thank you Shirley.. Stay safe..

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/6/2020 4:40:00 PM

Back to say congratulations on your winning poem, Jenish. This one just stood out to me.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/6/2020 10:40:00 PM

Thank you Sam.. I honoured your words more than the win..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/6/2020 4:03:00 PM

I liked the turn in second line--well done, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/6/2020 10:39:00 PM

Thank you Vijay..

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/6/2020 1:17:00 PM

Great contrast in your economy of lines, Jenish. "Cold slowly swept in" love that imagery.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/6/2020 10:33:00 PM

Thank you Sam for your delightful comment.. Stay safe..