Jenish Somadas Poet Verse

Cold and Hot

Cold
Slowly swept in after the rain danced in glee;
Pleasure streaks erupted as her lips kissed mine
Hot



Won first Place in STRAND POETRY PICK 2,Any theme,any form Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Cecilia Macfarlane April 8, 2020 at 6:11 AM Wow, love this. A deserving win indeed. Hugs Jenish Somadas April 8, 2020 at 7:21 AM Thank you Cecilia..Takecare..

Demetrios Trifiatis April 7, 2020 at 4:09 AM A stunning contrast! Superb writing dearest , Jenish! Hugs xxx Take care! Jenish Somadas April 8, 2020 at 1:15 AM Thank you Demetrios.. Stay safe..

Gershon Wolf April 6, 2020 at 7:41 PM Masterfully penned, Jenish. An all-time FAVE for me. Congrats! Blessings, Gershon Jenish Somadas April 6, 2020 at 10:46 PM Wow.. My friend, hugs.. Sorry.. Poetic hugs.. Thank you..

Sandra Adams April 6, 2020 at 7:24 PM love this... brilliantly penned... congratulations on your win... stay safe, hugs and blessings! Jenish Somadas April 6, 2020 at 10:44 PM Thank you Sandra for this delightful words.. Takecare..

Shirley Hawkins April 6, 2020 at 7:02 PM WOW! Jenish Somadas April 6, 2020 at 10:43 PM Thank you Shirley.. Stay safe..

Sam Kauffman April 6, 2020 at 4:40 PM Back to say congratulations on your winning poem, Jenish. This one just stood out to me. Jenish Somadas April 6, 2020 at 10:40 PM Thank you Sam.. I honoured your words more than the win..

Vijay Pandit April 6, 2020 at 4:03 PM I liked the turn in second line--well done, Jenish. Jenish Somadas April 6, 2020 at 10:39 PM Thank you Vijay..

Sam Kauffman April 6, 2020 at 1:17 PM Great contrast in your economy of lines, Jenish. "Cold slowly swept in" love that imagery. Jenish Somadas April 6, 2020 at 10:33 PM Thank you Sam for your delightful comment.. Stay safe..