Cold

THIS IS INSPIRED BY A POEM I READ, WHAT SEEMS LIKE A LIFE TIME AGO. NOT SURE HOW MUCH OF IT IS MINE. MAYBE YOU HAVE READ IT ALSO When I'm dead and buried in the ground My thoughts will be stilled, peace of mind Ill have found And when you come to stand over me with your display of false sorrow Iwill no longer be missing you That day or any to follow I feel it will be in the month of November Please dont ask me how Just know that I lay there even more cold hearted then you are standing there now

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2010 4:26:00 AM

Interesting thoughts put to pen...Nothing like a cold hearted person...Sara

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 8/2/2010 9:13:00 PM

Are you speaking in terms of people who read your poetry, or someone in particular? I know I have heard the poem before, but your words put a personal spin on it that make me think back to a time when I was lost and alone...or thought I was. I discovered that it was not the case at all...Keep writing and we will keep reading. Dan C ps. My feelings were expressed in my work "Even Angels Make Lemonade".

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 7/31/2010 12:16:00 AM

must say don't know what poem your talking about but, i enjoyed reading yours, good poem