David Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Cold

THIS IS INSPIRED BY A POEM I READ, WHAT SEEMS LIKE A LIFE TIME AGO. NOT SURE 
HOW MUCH OF IT IS MINE. MAYBE YOU HAVE READ IT ALSO

   When I'm dead and buried in the ground
My thoughts will be stilled, peace of mind Ill have found
And when you come to stand over me with your display of false sorrow
Iwill no longer be missing you
That day or any to follow
  
 I feel it will be in the month of November 
Please dont ask me how
Just know that I lay there even more cold hearted
then you are standing there now

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Sara Kendrick August 9, 2010 at 4:26 AM Interesting thoughts put to pen...Nothing like a cold hearted person...Sara

Daniel Cwiak August 2, 2010 at 9:13 PM Are you speaking in terms of people who read your poetry, or someone in particular? I know I have heard the poem before, but your words put a personal spin on it that make me think back to a time when I was lost and alone...or thought I was. I discovered that it was not the case at all...Keep writing and we will keep reading. Dan C ps. My feelings were expressed in my work "Even Angels Make Lemonade".

Jessica Arteaga July 31, 2010 at 12:16 AM must say don't know what poem your talking about but, i enjoyed reading yours, good poem