07/17/23
Black Country communion songs
Inspired by the song 'Cold'
Contest by Robert James Liguori
COLD Me sinking in cold ! Need little warmth. Why have you been so cold ? Hold your tongue and let me love ! Why have you been so cold ? My is already sold to my amour ! Now all hope is gone . Pretending to be bold ! But feeling cold even under Sun. Need little warmth. Why have you been so cold ? My love once was untold . But now I unfold each page of my book of love. Your reciprocation I do deserve. I preserved my love in core of heart. How can you ignore ? How can you hurt ? My yearnings shining as gold Lust rippled rolled. Emotive urge claiming dynamism, Yet feeling I am dying ! With deep wound in heart I am drowning down in living hell ! Growing old. No strength left to carry load Me sinking in cold. Stretching my hand, please hold. Me sinking in cold. Need little warmth.
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