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Coincidence Or Design

Was it by Coincidence or design That you came to be mine if only for the night The only night I wished for no dawn We stemed from different worlds but we blossomed in our very own Our language differed but our souls understood Just one night together and now most likely a lifetime apart but even that fact cannot taint Our night, our beating hearts My soul hopes for yours And I hope the universe is kind and brings us back together by coincidence or design

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/2/2014 4:39:00 PM
I loved this poem! Two boats float and meet on the big ocean at night... :)
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Date: 2/26/2014 6:22:00 PM
Sarah, Congratulations, on your win, thank you for sharing, and helping the reader Feel The emotions of Love through your poem. ~SKAT~
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Sarah Muldoon
Date: 2/27/2014 1:57:00 PM
Thanks Skat :)
Date: 2/21/2014 4:35:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on feeling the love and congrats on the fine win, sarah
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Sarah Muldoon
Date: 2/21/2014 11:50:00 AM
thank you, glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 2/19/2014 8:28:00 PM
I thought this was a very romantic and poignant poem, pulling at the heartstrings...each line seemed to fit so well; I particularly liked the closing lines, and that very last line linked nicely with the first line; a very well written piece - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Sarah Muldoon
Date: 2/20/2014 7:46:00 PM
Thanks you Charlotte for reading and your feedback :) I won? wow thats great news once again thanks so much :) ,.... Sarah
Date: 2/17/2014 8:40:00 PM
This is fantastic Sarah..I adore it...Hugs Tim
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Sarah Muldoon
Date: 2/17/2014 8:42:00 PM
Thanks so much :)

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