Coffee Grounds

showered coffee grounds - aromatic soiled water in a clean cup 3/8/2018

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Mick Talbot

Date: 3/10/2018 1:45:00 PM

Great haiku, but 'SOILED' water? sounds unhealthy. Not a critique Kim, just how I perceive your image. The aroma of fresh brewed ground coffee reminds me of Germany, happy days.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2018 8:30:00 PM

Soiled in looks, not spoiled ;) LOL

Paul Callus

Date: 3/10/2018 8:21:00 AM

I love the aroma of coffee, and of this related haiku, Kim:) Some people don't like coffee...I can't live without it! Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2018 8:31:00 AM

I especially love it after buying an aeropress, a coffee grinder and a frother. My neighbor says it is better than Starbucks. I love using salted caramel creamer. :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/10/2018 8:20:00 AM

My morning cup of coffee and I are both in pause mode after this clever read. Ah, what the hey, I'm sipping my soiled water and glad of it. Clever, clever and a pauser for me, to be sure! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2018 8:29:00 AM

Thanks so much CayCay! HUGS!