The Whiskey Taster’s Flavor Guide

Coffee Break

The L. T. was green,
And equally mean,
Full of swagger and bluster,
And all the authority he could muster.
Bold in command,
This brash little man,
Who strode all around
Like he owned the damn ground--
Barking orders and spittle,
Never regarding how little
Regard in which he was held.

It was the midnight shift,
And L. T. in a tiff,
Cause his coffee had run out.
The L. T. with a shout,
Demanded a fresh pot be made--
No matter if the deployment was delayed.

In stepped the Sergeant broad and tall,
Striding to the Lieutenant who suddenly seemed small.
“The troops have a duty to move this line.
Your coffee can wait--this ain’t the time.
“And never raise your voice to one of mine.”
The Sergeant stared a moment then turned on a dime,
And made himself a cup of joe taking his sweet ass time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Upadhyay  Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 8:41 PM
This is humorous and vivid. The story captures tension, authority, and a clever twist with a strong sense of character. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Derden Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 7:38 AM
All based on actual happenings. I was there.
Kendrick Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 4:22 PM
Creative work you have penned. I could see the scene taking shape from your lines. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K
Derden Avatar
September 16, 2025 at 7:43 AM
I wrote this some time after the event. I was there and thought the scene should be captured in verse for posterities sake...lol
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