Codes of Conduct

...to My Mom


She was always in the kitchen, 
kneading pastry with good humour,
blending garnishes and gossip
as she wove her magic wand
and it was dinner time.

Struggling with algebra 
I'd agonize for hours, 'til frustration
got the best of me, she tucked me into bed.
In the morning she was ready with
two fried eggs, the answer, and a hug.

Music was her gift to me, along with
many others, the sound of her soprano
voice still mellow in the air,
the wrath of God was nothing to
her tantrums at my misbehaviour.

Sights and smells come bursting through
as if it were just yesterday,
gentle guidance, remonstrations,
blending like her recipes
for cakes and codes of conduct.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/1/2012 6:55:00 PM
You were blessed. This touches. As I read, I remembered my mom singing "Four Walls" and doing the laundry with a Maytag wringer.
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Date: 6/20/2012 2:29:00 PM
Sounds like a mom on the warpath with a sweet little boy to train. Every child should have memories like these.
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Date: 5/14/2012 9:34:00 PM
this is AWESOME. I love it. How you blended the idea of her cooking with codes of conduct at the end, that was the perfect ending!
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Date: 5/14/2012 8:21:00 PM
This sounds like a trip back to memory lane and some of the wonderful things in your younger years. Sounds like a wonderful mom. love phyl
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Date: 5/14/2012 6:29:00 PM
They sound like beautiful memories... and it's a very beautiful poem.
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Date: 5/14/2012 6:29:00 PM
They sound like beautiful memories... and it's a very beautiful poem.
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