COCOONED AND COMING

COCOONED AND COMING 

Caterpillaring,
I’m cocooning oppression:
Liberty soon soars:-

analogyfreedominspirationalintrospectionlifehaiku

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Alison A Smith

October 2, 2026 at 7:08 PM

A compelling senryu-like reflection: the inventive verb “Caterpillaring” makes transformation feel active and personal, while the movement from oppression to soaring liberty gives the tiny poem real uplift. The chrysalis metaphor carries both patience and promise with graceful economy.

Millard Lowe

October 3, 2026 at 9:38 AM

One. Thanks Alison. Thus must be the human nature, of our transformations, through trials and tribulations, as we soar to liberation. Peace and Love.

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