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Coconuts and Fish and Birds

Coconuts and Fish and Birds If coconuts could grow on trees and birds could fly and fish could swim. What a wonderful world we’d all enjoy, what a wonderful world we’d all live in. If every line I wrote could rhyme and poetry spilled from my pen, I’d write about the things I find and how,and why, and where,and when. If everything I wrote made sense there’d be no interest in my words. That’s why I write,and love the world, and coconuts, and fish, and birds. Ivor G Davies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/16/2011 3:59:00 PM
Edited the Title....thanks (also for the comments)
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Date: 6/16/2011 11:33:00 AM
If (watch out, all the reviews you recieve on this poem may begin with if) I had to decide which of your poems I like best it would take me a very long time. p.s. is that 'f' in your title a misspelling?
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Date: 6/10/2011 2:55:00 PM
If I could rhyme as well as you // and wow the world with poetry // I'd also write of birds that flew // and fish and coconuts on trees. Nice one, Ivor. You're not mentioning it, but I hope you intend submitting this smooth piece to the "What if" contest. :))
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