Coconut Trees

Coconut trees sway
in the Sunday evening calm …
fragrance of the wind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 23, 2013 at 6:26 AM
Good morning, Keith congratulations with having your poem featured on the soups home page. Take care and enjoy the coming week. ~XOX~ *LIND
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June 26, 2013 at 7:34 AM
I am proud to be on the home page with this piece! And, you too, do enjoy your week!
Dietrich Avatar
June 15, 2013 at 3:20 PM
this creates a beautiful image in my mind.
Simmonds Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 1:06 AM
Glad this one touched you, Andrea! Will submit more!
A   Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 9:43 PM
Hi Keith. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest in the future* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. You are welcomed to look for me anytime you need certain feedback on any given poem. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love- LOL) * Always * ;-) Linda
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June 16, 2013 at 1:10 AM
Just had a peek at some of your poetry and will comment on same later on. I entered your contest and am looking forward to more of your work. You might be interested in other prize contests...if so, let me know and I'll be happy to send you a few links!
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June 14, 2013 at 12:50 AM
- Beautiful haiku, Keith. - Thank you - Welcome to P-Soup! - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - Have fun with poetry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Simmonds Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 1:30 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise! I am enjoying this site and have much more to post.
Mohammed Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 8:09 PM
Lovely haiku Keith,welcome to poetrysoup.
Simmonds Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 1:31 AM
Thanks, Mustapha! Happy to be here!
Hamilton Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 1:38 PM
welcome to the Soup Keith a lovely haiku nice flow Shadow x
Simmonds Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 1:32 AM
Thank you, Shadow! Hope to enjoy the Soup!
Moore Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 7:09 AM
amazing
Simmonds Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 1:29 AM
Appreciate it, Cathy!
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