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cobwebs

cobwebs drape the moon in silk

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Robert Schatz

Date: 1/17/2024 10:41:00 AM

Thank you Paghunda!

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 1/17/2024 5:08:00 AM

Simple yet beautiful..!! Blessings!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2024 1:21:00 PM

stunningly sublime!

Robert Schatz

Date: 1/15/2024 10:05:00 AM

Thank you Sara!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/15/2024 7:13:00 AM

Ahh!!! I like this one for its simplicity and saying so much with so few words. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Robert Schatz

Date: 1/13/2024 12:45:00 AM

Thank you!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/12/2024 6:41:00 PM

Very beautiful. Yes, I've seen the moon like this.

Robert Schatz
Date: 1/13/2024 12:49:00 AM

Thank you Hilda. It is a sight to behind.

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/12/2024 2:03:00 PM

Hello Robert. I love this Haiku. Well crafted words, deep and clever. I agree with you with using ‘silk’ in the last line. Silky cobwebs. I like it! Hope you’ve had a good start to the year. Keep writing lots this year. Blessings to you :):)

Robert Schatz
Date: 1/13/2024 12:47:00 AM

Thank you Christina! Blessings to you as well. I greatly admire your work.

Silent One

Date: 1/12/2024 1:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Ink Empress

Date: 1/12/2024 12:21:00 AM

I love how you’ve written “ drape the moon in silk” beautiful and deep haiku. So picturesque. Well delivered. Pleasure reading your work

Robert Schatz
Date: 1/12/2024 2:32:00 AM

Thank you again, Ink Express

Robert Schatz

Date: 1/11/2024 3:43:00 PM

Thank you Kim!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/11/2024 3:19:00 PM

Love the first two lines!

Robert Schatz
Date: 1/12/2024 2:34:00 AM

I changed the last line from "silent" to "in silk" I think it's better...