cobwebs

cobwebs
drape the moon
in silk

moonsilencehaiku

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Robert Schatz

January 17, 2024 at 10:41 AM

Thank you Paghunda!

Paghunda Zahid

January 17, 2024 at 5:08 AM

Simple yet beautiful..!! Blessings!

Andrea Dietrich

January 16, 2024 at 1:21 PM

stunningly sublime!

Robert Schatz

January 15, 2024 at 10:05 AM

Thank you Sara!

Sara Kendrick

January 15, 2024 at 7:13 AM

Ahh!!! I like this one for its simplicity and saying so much with so few words. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Robert Schatz

January 13, 2024 at 12:45 AM

Thank you!

Hilda Greenhough

January 12, 2024 at 6:41 PM

Very beautiful. Yes, I've seen the moon like this.

Robert Schatz

January 13, 2024 at 12:49 AM

Thank you Hilda. It is a sight to behind.

Christina Bowring

January 12, 2024 at 2:03 PM

Hello Robert. I love this Haiku. Well crafted words, deep and clever. I agree with you with using ‘silk’ in the last line. Silky cobwebs. I like it! Hope you’ve had a good start to the year. Keep writing lots this year. Blessings to you :):)

Robert Schatz

January 13, 2024 at 12:47 AM

Thank you Christina! Blessings to you as well. I greatly admire your work.