Cobweb Wishes

A virgin wish, coupled with passion-a spray of luck-ambition,
can be foundation for sparkling things...
a first flight -a newborn cry
Gracefully treading nightmares in black finned nights.
Turning a death rattle into melodies in pearl
strung along the gilded wings of infinity.

A greying wish is an opaque endeavor.
It lends the hands to idling
creasing the satin of reality.
Old wishes dangle wearily from the ceiling
like dying Faries in a cobweb dream.

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Date: 7/8/2024 8:59:00 AM
Dear Anthony, your potent and poignant imagery paints a vivid portrait of "cobweb dreams". I especially enjoyed "black finned nights" and "death rattle into melodies in pearl/strung along the gilded wings of infinity" and your last two lines for a breathtaking finale. Superb! Congratulations for your win in Craig's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 7/8/2024 3:19:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it Susan, I thought it could have been polished up a bit more, but I have a lazy streak and just tossed it into the ring. God bless Anthony
Date: 7/6/2024 1:56:00 AM
"like dying Faries in a cobweb dream." excellent writing, congratulations
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 7/6/2024 9:27:00 PM
Hi Terry glad you liked it Anthony
Date: 7/5/2024 6:58:00 PM
beautiful thoughts, I liked your word forms: grey wish, cobweb dream.. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Happy writing.
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Anthony Biaanco
Date: 7/6/2024 9:28:00 PM
Thanks for the input. God Bless Anthony
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