Cobweb Dream

Cobweb Dream
                                by Shirley Rebstock


During the night, I had a dream
What in the world did it mean
I was bringing this patient to a doctor it seemed

I was not sure as it was getting late
If they would even see him on this date
Or would he have a long wait

This is where I work I told him with pride
As we went up the stairs more narrow than wide
Recently, returning from a long train ride

Dark and dingy walking through the hall
Even seeing dirt under the stalls, 
"Oooooh cobwebs" on the ceiling way up tall

At the top of the stairs, we opened a door
A sticky cobweb fell on our head then onto the floor
"Oooooh cobwebs" sticking to what we wore

On the other side of the door were doctors so kind, 
Working late, not seeming to mind
Caring for patients while most people dined

While waiting for the patient, I wondered who was to blame
For letting the cobwebs become so untamed
Either they were lazy or off their game

I wondered if the cobwebs were always there
High up on the ceiling where I did not stare
Even if I had, would I have cared

It made me ponder the cobwebs on my soul
Maybe they need a good cleaning to make me whole
So on my life and others they would not take a toll

So rather than blame or ignore
I asked the patient on his return,"Do you have cobwebs on your door
That fall from the ceiling to the floor?"

What is the meaning of this dream
Is it my soul that needs to be redeemed
Or just the office needs to be cleaned
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 5:57 PM
wow, your first poem posted. It's so profound. I have such WEIRD dreams, and many show no meaning, but yours I think does have a very deep meaning as you suggested in this poem
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June 20, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Thank you and thank you for writing beautiful poems and giving flowers of support to me and others
Horsman Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 10:51 AM
Just taking in your first post here on soup, love the theme, and the cobweb, which the spider weaves, like yourself a weaver of wonderful words...
Rebstock Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 11:52 PM
Thank you very much. I almost forgot this one.
Bavington  Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Makes us think. Cobwebs go off in so many different directions. Where does it find us? Nicely done.
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July 2, 2017 at 3:09 PM
Thanks
Callus Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 8:56 AM
Quite an entertaining poem, Shirley! Those cobwebs must have turned into a nightmare! They say that dreams do have a meaning; your final two lines appear to lead to a solution! // paul
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June 5, 2015 at 9:26 AM
Thank you
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June 4, 2015 at 9:08 PM
This poem is highly entertaining with an enclosed serious message. Welcome to the soup!
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June 5, 2015 at 9:25 AM
Thank you so much
A  Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 10:48 AM
Shirley :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love
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May 11, 2015 at 12:52 PM
Just saw this. What a nice suprise. Thank you
A   Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 6:18 PM
thank you for the reply Shirley
A  Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 1:14 AM
Shirley, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 2, 2015 at 11:27 AM
Thank you, you are welcome to be my poetry friend.
A   Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:28 PM
Shirley, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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April 29, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Thank you, hoping to have some time off from work to be able to read other's poems.
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April 25, 2015 at 8:35 PM
Thank you again, One question, do you have to be a premium member to enter a contest, meaning pay a year's subscription?
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April 25, 2015 at 7:01 PM
Thank you. just found this site. Enjoy reading others poems too.
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April 21, 2015 at 1:57 PM
- Hello Shirley - I want to welcome you to the P-Soup - You have come to the right place, here you will find many talented poets :) - Share your work, try two get some "poets" friends :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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April 21, 2015 at 5:29 PM
Thank you
Leake Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 2:36 AM
Interesting piece Shirley, Enjoyed your poetry on cobwebs Does get you thinking!! Have a nice day Kevin
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April 21, 2015 at 7:09 AM
Yep and thanks
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