Cobalt Blue Clouds

cobalt blue clouds hang barely illuminated.. summer's full moon shines under the boardwalk my love kisses tenderly... rain drips through small cracks
Love the pictures Thanks for the challenge, P.D Contest: Kissing In The Rain(2 Haiku)Nature Style Picture #5

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Date: 5/30/2013 8:47:00 AM
This is really awesome! I love it so much! My belated hearty congratulations my dear friend Sara for your great win! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 5/30/2013 6:46:00 AM
congrats Sara, that is beautiful!!
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Date: 5/29/2013 12:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win. As usual, very nicely done. AO
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Date: 5/29/2013 1:04:00 AM
So far, this is one of the best I"ve seen on the list. A well deserved win and congrats to you.
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Date: 5/28/2013 10:29:00 AM
Congrats my sweet friend for your win in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/28/2013 7:48:00 AM
congrats on your win Sara
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Date: 5/28/2013 7:21:00 AM
Very original and beautiful Sara...congratulations
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Date: 5/28/2013 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations, love it...the cobalt blue side of life...
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:00:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/27/2013 7:08:00 PM
Sara, a little off on the title... however, i love the cobalt imagery in your haiku. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA
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Date: 5/24/2013 12:02:00 PM
And you have done it in perfect 5/7/5 :))
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Date: 5/24/2013 12:01:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in this haiku Sara.Lovely read.Best wishes to you.
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Date: 5/24/2013 8:20:00 AM
Romantic! When in love, wherever we are kissed, divine the kiss! Marvelous! Good luck Sara! Thank you!
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Date: 5/23/2013 3:43:00 PM
Reminds me of the album cover of Firefalls first album. Cobolt Blue Clouds, pulled me right in with the title.
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Date: 5/23/2013 2:59:00 PM
Sara my favorite blue. This is a fabulous Haiku for the photo. Sounds like a winner. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 5/23/2013 12:19:00 PM
Another smashing write Sara, all the best in the contest xx
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Date: 5/23/2013 9:59:00 AM
Sara, Love the cobalt blue clouds and the other powerful word choices. An excellent entry that is full of imagery, good luck to you.
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Date: 5/23/2013 9:41:00 AM
- Sara, it's gorgeous - beautiful words .... Number one, I believe - Good luck in the contest! - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/23/2013 7:47:00 AM
Wow, you have hit the nail squarely on the head here with this write! I believe PD will have an extremely hard time judging this contest because all the entries I've read so far have be phenomenal, just like this one is, I am quite impressed Sara! You have outdone yourself with this remarkable poem, what a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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