Cobalt Blue Clouds

cobalt blue clouds hang barely illuminated.. summer's full moon shines under the boardwalk my love kisses tenderly... rain drips through small cracks
Love the pictures Thanks for the challenge, P.D Contest: Kissing In The Rain(2 Haiku)Nature Style Picture #5
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Gasun Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 8:47 AM
This is really awesome! I love it so much! My belated hearty congratulations my dear friend Sara for your great win! love and big hugs, Leonora
Nair Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 6:46 AM
congrats Sara, that is beautiful!!
Oyewole Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 12:42 PM
Congrats on your win. As usual, very nicely done. AO
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:04 AM
So far, this is one of the best I"ve seen on the list. A well deserved win and congrats to you.
Devnath  Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 10:29 AM
Congrats my sweet friend for your win in the contest. Loved always, bl
May Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 7:48 AM
congrats on your win Sara
Jones Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 7:21 AM
Very original and beautiful Sara...congratulations
Konos Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:00 AM
Congratulations, love it...the cobalt blue side of life...
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 2:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:08 PM
Sara, a little off on the title... however, i love the cobalt imagery in your haiku. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA
Poet Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 12:02 PM
And you have done it in perfect 5/7/5 :))
Poet Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 12:01 PM
Beautiful imagery in this haiku Sara.Lovely read.Best wishes to you.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Romantic! When in love, wherever we are kissed, divine the kiss! Marvelous! Good luck Sara! Thank you!
Johnson Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 3:43 PM
Reminds me of the album cover of Firefalls first album. Cobolt Blue Clouds, pulled me right in with the title.
Gildersleeve Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Sara my favorite blue. This is a fabulous Haiku for the photo. Sounds like a winner. Warm Smiles, Connie
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 12:19 PM
Another smashing write Sara, all the best in the contest xx
B Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 9:59 AM
Sara, Love the cobalt blue clouds and the other powerful word choices. An excellent entry that is full of imagery, good luck to you.
Andresen Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 9:41 AM
- Sara, it's gorgeous - beautiful words .... Number one, I believe - Good luck in the contest! - Have a lovely day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Sivey Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 7:47 AM
Wow, you have hit the nail squarely on the head here with this write! I believe PD will have an extremely hard time judging this contest because all the entries I've read so far have be phenomenal, just like this one is, I am quite impressed Sara! You have outdone yourself with this remarkable poem, what a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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