coat or gun

dad said buy thick coat son bought gun so now dad says ~ wear gun and milk cows
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Rodgers Avatar
October 10, 2025 at 7:27 AM
Dear CayCay, I smiled reading your poem and thought the father's wisdom and the child's desire, which was not filled with wisdom. Great little read this morning. Autumn Blessings, Dear CayCay, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2025 at 7:07 PM
That's a strange one!!
Hind Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 5:49 PM
haha!!
Godwin Avatar
October 8, 2025 at 5:53 PM
This happened to a friend's ancestors in the 1700's, they owned a farm, and the kid didn't listen to Dad!!! Thanks, Paige. CayCay
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