Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

Clump of Golden Rods

clump of golden rods
at edge of manicured yard...
capricious weed seed  


capricious=erratic
weed seed float on air currents
are carried by birds, etc.
erratic travel and where they
fall erratic

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Joe Maverick October 10, 2012 at 1:28 PM Loved the nature element as you have shown in this write Sara.."

Harry Horsman October 9, 2012 at 7:50 AM Hey Sara, this is very clever, the imagery i see so clearly....

Len Gasun October 9, 2012 at 12:48 AM Hhmmmmnnn....... very fantastic and fascinating haiku to read, Sara. Those weeds really are eye sore, lol. I love it and thank you so much for sharing! love and hugs:) Leonora

Laura Breidenthal October 8, 2012 at 8:59 PM Excellent haiku! You never fail to intrigue me with your fantastic writes. Always, Laura

Russell Sivey October 8, 2012 at 5:34 PM Yes, I know the kind! I hate those stubborn weeds too! This is an awesome display of what those devilish things are! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Stephen Parker October 8, 2012 at 5:21 PM I like the round description of the golden rods. A capricious clump. Nice juxtaposition with the tidy, well-governed yard. Enjoyed your scintillating landscape!

Leo Larry Amadore October 8, 2012 at 5:00 PM A nice haiku Sara...I really enjoyed reading it and thinking about it...

Len Gasun October 8, 2012 at 4:47 PM Very beautiful Haiku, Sara. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by reading my work leaving me an inspiring comment. Have a nice day!!! love, leonora

Olusegun Arowolo October 8, 2012 at 4:44 PM Beautiful and interesting piece,Sara..."Capricious weed seed"-nice description...Good job..And Thanks for your comments on my work,Have a smooth week..