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Clump of Golden Rods

clump of golden rods at edge of manicured yard... capricious weed seed capricious=erratic weed seed float on air currents are carried by birds, etc. erratic travel and where they fall erratic

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Joe Maverick

Date: 10/10/2012 1:28:00 PM

Loved the nature element as you have shown in this write Sara.."

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/9/2012 7:50:00 AM

Hey Sara, this is very clever, the imagery i see so clearly....

Len Gasun

Date: 10/9/2012 12:48:00 AM

Hhmmmmnnn....... very fantastic and fascinating haiku to read, Sara. Those weeds really are eye sore, lol. I love it and thank you so much for sharing! love and hugs:) Leonora

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/8/2012 8:59:00 PM

Excellent haiku! You never fail to intrigue me with your fantastic writes. Always, Laura

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/8/2012 5:34:00 PM

Yes, I know the kind! I hate those stubborn weeds too! This is an awesome display of what those devilish things are! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Stephen Parker

Date: 10/8/2012 5:21:00 PM

I like the round description of the golden rods. A capricious clump. Nice juxtaposition with the tidy, well-governed yard. Enjoyed your scintillating landscape!

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 10/8/2012 5:00:00 PM

A nice haiku Sara...I really enjoyed reading it and thinking about it...

Len Gasun

Date: 10/8/2012 4:47:00 PM

Very beautiful Haiku, Sara. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by reading my work leaving me an inspiring comment. Have a nice day!!! love, leonora

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/8/2012 4:44:00 PM

Beautiful and interesting piece,Sara..."Capricious weed seed"-nice description...Good job..And Thanks for your comments on my work,Have a smooth week..