Sara Kendrick Poet Triolet

Clueless Men

Most men really don't have a clue
They are reason we ladies feel sad
We take courses, powder, paint we do
Most men really don't have a clue

Attention, touch, caring  yes you
Just a little time__happy glad
Most men really don't have a clue
They are reason we ladies feel sad

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Anthony Beesley August 2, 2010 at 12:43 PM some do and some don't and some just don't care

Lynette Chachere July 31, 2010 at 5:49 PM you're right, many of them don't have a clue, all they can say is oh well because they don't know how it feels. and thanks sara(: hope you're well ~Always&Forever Lynette

Joe Flach July 27, 2010 at 12:56 PM Since this seems to be such common knowledge, how come you women are so surprised everytime we live up to this claim? Love the scene when she greets him at the door wrapped in Saran Wrap. Taaaawandaaa. Oh - my favorite scene..."Face it girls, I am older and have more insurance." Nice write. Joe

C.C Bloomsfield July 27, 2010 at 10:01 AM Tnks for the explanation in the below boxes,Some men or many don't have a clue ,that's true!Is there a contest about phrases going in,this is my favorite so far,C.C.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 27, 2010 at 7:47 AM I enjoyed reading your newest poem today Sara. I want to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop July 27, 2010 at 6:22 AM Well written and observed, Sara! keep your imaginative pen flowing and have a great week!...Gert

Doris Culverhouse July 27, 2010 at 6:15 AM enjoyed reading your works today! Great write!

Raj Nandy July 27, 2010 at 5:48 AM SARA , WHAT YOU SAY IS MOSTLY TRUE ; MOST MEN DON'T HAVE A CLUE ! YOU CAN COUNT ME IN TOO ! TIME PERMITTING KINDLY COMMENT ON MY - 'HARLEM BLUE' ! THANKING YOU ! -Raj

Wilma Neels July 27, 2010 at 5:15 AM Interesting take on "clueless men" I would say I totally agree with this piece but I might just be cruxified for that hehe.. Enjoyed this Sara, hope you'll have a great day -- Wilma Ps: thank you for your thoughts on "me - a total stranger"

Sara Kendrick July 27, 2010 at 4:48 AM From the movie "Fried Green Tomatoes"..Middle age couple that romance has disappeared from marriage and wife is taking courses to try to put the spark back..Scene wife is tearing down wall between two rooms and she tells husband the reason I am taking these courses is to try and save our marriage...