Donn Ronquillo Poet Narrative

Clubhouse Party

pooh with the only tools of honey and smarts;
mickey with his best friend Donald,
oh! what a party to start.
the three wanted to celebrate the clubhouse opening;
so they started to cheer,
giggled merrily,
and started the music.
oh! what a good time they had!
everybody was glad;
but pooh became sad,
maybe, because it was the end.
but, later we found out,
he just ran out of honey.
so mickey said,"be happy don't pout."

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Joe Maverick February 10, 2013 at 10:17 AM Yes pouting isn't the norm at partys Donn, enjoyed reading this winning entry for Leonoras contest:)

Poet Destroyer A February 9, 2013 at 8:40 PM Donn, stopping by to say hi, and check out all of Leonora's fun and fabulous contest Pooh and Disney tooooo winners*LOL :-) love your poem ... Good-night ~ LINDA "

Len Gasun February 9, 2013 at 9:28 AM Congratulations my dear friend Donn on your win and great entry in my “Disney Kids/Winnie and Mickey” poem writing contest. I extremely enjoyed reading your awesome poem/story. Thank you so much! Love/hugs, Leonora