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Cloudy Smoke Delusion (Aka Csd) Revised

I remember  —  WHEN
We first kissed  —  YOUR
Sweet lips plunged me into your  —  HEART’S
Deepest pool  —  ON
Into your embrace of  —  FIRE
Caressing the sweet embers that were  —  YOU
My heart ablaze in flames of passion that  —  MUST
Have clouded all reason blinding me not to  —  REALIZE
Breathless and gasping the perilous  —  SMOKE
Burning and swirling everywhere  —  GETS
Me lost in a maze to stray from your heart  —  IN
A cruel twist of fate I stumbled loosing  —  YOUR
Precious love never to see it again in your  —  EYES
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 9:36 PM
I hadn't seen this one, Tom, and am really sorry things didn't work out. Now I am facing uncertainty in the future and wishing things had been different, but we can't live in the past. I guess we should just be thankful if we live at all. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 10:46 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Thomas. I wish you a weekend full of love and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
Budd Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 2:18 PM
Wow. This is very different, interesting. I like where you went with it though I truly wish it didn't end up that way. Great write.
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