Cloudy

Rain clouds high above
   A mirror of tainted love…
       Will fall to pieces
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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August 30, 2008 at 6:39 PM
soemtimes alot of words are not necessary to get the meaning across, take care D-nyce
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August 28, 2008 at 11:54 AM
Intersting use of this short format. Much to think about in your words. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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August 28, 2008 at 6:41 AM
Nicely done!! I can almost see broken glass falling from the sky!....Carrie
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August 27, 2008 at 8:19 PM
The symbology is quite vivid. The flows very well. Great job! ~ Joseph
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