Clouds Pass the Full Moon

striated full moon
reminds me of the blood moon
imperfect beauty


11/6/14
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Gauthier Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 11:02 AM
lovely poem, James.
Goff Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 11:04 AM
Thanks Line!
Mohn Avatar
November 26, 2014 at 3:42 PM
Really like this James, beautiful image...might you be a Minnesota man? I saw your Split Rock Lighthouse photo... I am a Twin Cities guy myself, best wishes
Kendrick Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 6:58 AM
Striated with clouds?..Enjoyed reading your work..We will have another blood moon in April I think..There are four in a row..Sara
Callus Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 3:00 AM
Hi James! Perfection does not attract me...it has an artificial look about it. It is through imperfection that beauty comes to the fore. Hope you're keeping well. // paul
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 11:31 PM
I like that: imperfect beauty. it's the best kind!!
Meade Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 7:39 AM
Ah, nature imitating human nature . . . we are created beautifully but are fatally flawed. Great haiku!
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