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Clouds Pass the Full Moon

striated full moon reminds me of the blood moon imperfect beauty 11/6/14 © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 12/1/2019 11:02:00 AM
lovely poem, James.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/1/2019 11:04:00 AM
Thanks Line!
Date: 11/26/2014 3:42:00 PM
Really like this James, beautiful image...might you be a Minnesota man? I saw your Split Rock Lighthouse photo... I am a Twin Cities guy myself, best wishes
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Date: 11/15/2014 6:58:00 AM
Striated with clouds?..Enjoyed reading your work..We will have another blood moon in April I think..There are four in a row..Sara
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Date: 11/8/2014 3:00:00 AM
Hi James! Perfection does not attract me...it has an artificial look about it. It is through imperfection that beauty comes to the fore. Hope you're keeping well. // paul
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Date: 11/6/2014 11:31:00 PM
I like that: imperfect beauty. it's the best kind!!
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Date: 11/6/2014 7:39:00 AM
Ah, nature imitating human nature . . . we are created beautifully but are fatally flawed. Great haiku!
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