---Clouds of Blackflies

clouds of blackflies
smear the car's windshield
red dawn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 7, 2012 at 3:35 PM
deep imagery...pd
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April 4, 2011 at 10:13 AM
I see that you are a traveler dear poet ! ;) great write Debbie... much love, james
Foulk Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 8:52 PM
a very creative Haiku you wrote Debbie, enjoyed it.
Brumley Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 3:25 PM
Don't I know it! I have to wash my car daily because of the gnats and other various bugs that find their last living moment on my windshield. Did you get my e-mail add? I was hoping that you would respond, I would really like to converse with you without the character restrictions of soup mail.
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April 3, 2011 at 2:34 PM
wow! what a descriptive haiku..this is awesome..the colors painted in my mind as i read are wonderful...superb write!...love maryam
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