clouds hiku

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For Brian Strand's Your Choice I Poetry Contest 23 May 2025

~ ~ * ~ ~ * clouds sail overhead * ~ slow brushstrokes of canvas skies ~ * a framed horizon * ~ ~ * ~ ~

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/23/2025 5:03:00 PM

So very pretty and I didn' t have to turn my head sideways to enjoy the read (something I apparently need to start, not only doing, but enjoying.) Truly lovely ... CayCay

Ink Empress

Date: 5/23/2025 1:07:00 PM

Gosh yours is so dreamy!!!! Made me dream away! How artistic! I tried stars for my fireworks this time in my hiku, inspired by your moon hiku. And i must say this is even better and floats! A framed horizon well presented! Pleasure reading you today! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/23/2025 12:05:00 PM

Your "clouds hiku" is a fun write. I enjoyed reading this one. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away..........