Clouds and moon

Inky tendrils reach
grasping for her slick surface
sliding off smooth skin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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June 30, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Dear Simon, this is a wonderful, so well written and very creative haiku. I love the imagery you have so cleverly crafted here. I can see the clouds reaching out for the moon but not being able to take a firm hold. Great imagination. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :)
Scott Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 6:03 AM
Thank you Christina….very kind indeed…
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