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Clouds and moon

Inky tendrils reach grasping for her slick surface sliding off smooth skin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 6/30/2024 5:57:00 AM
Dear Simon, this is a wonderful, so well written and very creative haiku. I love the imagery you have so cleverly crafted here. I can see the clouds reaching out for the moon but not being able to take a firm hold. Great imagination. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :)
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Simon Scott
Date: 6/30/2024 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Christina….very kind indeed…

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