Clouds and a Moment

Clouds and a moment

When a cloud rolled over lake Michigan 
cast an eerie spell of otherness over the lake
the stillness was profound when a bird
shrieked in horror.

When the cloud disappeared up yonder
a ferry crossed the lake's undulating water
reached the shore as a wet handshake 
of monotony.
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Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 7:41 AM
Very interesting imagery! The cloud drew attention perhaps away from the usual monotony of life. Love the shriek of the bird. I can almost hear it! Well done!
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