Clouded, Cluttered Mind

Cloudy Day
Unfulfilled Dreams
Shuttered soul

Twilight encroaches
Fading Hope
Eclipsed heart

Dark Night
Steady rain
Flooded spirit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Laan Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 2:47 AM
Your senryu and haiku are amazing. I am so glad to have found them but also that you do not adhere to the rigid 5, 7, 5.....I can post my non traditional haiku now.
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November 26, 2010 at 8:33 AM
A very touching senryu series, Stephen. I'm going to make it my mission to lift your spirits over the holidays! Wishing you joy and love, Carolyn
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