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Cloud, Rock, Tide

Grazing memories that make me proud...
Eyes in heavens, I watch one cloud

and the time is not felt: tick-tock
My head feels peaceful by this rock

Melting in sand my heart sighs,
as my body lives in this tide...

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Gert W. Knop

July 22, 2010 at 5:18 AM

Enjoyed your write today afternoon, Jessica! And thank you for commenting my Aphorism! Wish you a bright day!....:) Gert

Andrea Dietrich

July 21, 2010 at 9:47 PM

I like this Jessica. (but just to warn you, the final word in each little couplet was supposed to start with the same letter. For example, I chose tree/twilght/tides. Go read his blog again. He means for us to rhyme "first letters" at the end of each couplet. (I sure hope I am telling you this right) Nice seeing you here tonight. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 21, 2010 at 10:49 AM

Here I sit with lots to do,....... but.......I would rather read poetry written by you. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration Jessica. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 20, 2010 at 11:55 PM

Hi Jessica :) This sure is a very calming write-- can't help but feel sort of relaxed with it-- what bliss to just forget the time! Enjoyed this one and thanks, glad you liked the concept of blackout poetry :) -- nikko :)

Francine Roberts

July 20, 2010 at 9:12 PM

what a relaxing scene, lovely, good luck

Cecil Hickman

July 20, 2010 at 8:19 PM

A very beautifully written crystalline threesome ,,if for contest,,i wish you all the best,,and thank you for visiting my words and leaving your precious ones behind,,blessings..Cecil