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Cloud Quietus

White chariot
pounds pavement blue,
hooves beat tattoo
on drum of sky.

Ashen fleece borne,
softly I lie,
earth's pull defy-
victory ride.



Faye Gibson
Copyright, August 3, 2014

Copyright © Faye Gibson | Year Posted 2014

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August 11, 2014 at 9:44 PM

Congrats on a fine win Faye

August 11, 2014 at 7:35 PM

Oh that is a cool image, hooves beat tattoo on drum of sky... love that line, grats on your win :)

August 11, 2014 at 3:02 PM

My personal fav! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

August 11, 2014 at 7:06 AM

picturesque view from here..thanks for supporting my contest and big cheers on your splendid win, faye..huggs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 11, 2014 at 5:42 AM

Love ur write Faye, congrats on fine win!

August 10, 2014 at 9:32 AM

I love the imagery here - congratulations on a fine win:-) Hugs Jan xx

August 10, 2014 at 6:26 AM

a nice victory ride, Faye, Congrats. Mohan

August 10, 2014 at 5:42 AM

Full of sentiments, congrats on the win, Faye

Andrea Dietrich

August 6, 2014 at 6:58 PM

wow, you are putting many of us to shame delivering one like this. VERY good stuff. I hope Sandy replies to you!!

August 6, 2014 at 1:01 PM

I love the scenery and sentiment. And the title is really good . Nice, Faye !

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