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Cloud Quietus

White chariot pounds pavement blue, hooves beat tattoo on drum of sky. Ashen fleece borne, softly I lie, earth's pull defy- victory ride. Faye Gibson Copyright, August 3, 2014

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Joseph May

Date: 8/11/2014 9:44:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Faye

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/11/2014 7:35:00 PM

Oh that is a cool image, hooves beat tattoo on drum of sky... love that line, grats on your win :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/11/2014 3:02:00 PM

My personal fav! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/11/2014 7:06:00 AM

picturesque view from here..thanks for supporting my contest and big cheers on your splendid win, faye..huggs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/11/2014 5:42:00 AM

Love ur write Faye, congrats on fine win!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/10/2014 9:32:00 AM

I love the imagery here - congratulations on a fine win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Mohan Chutani

Date: 8/10/2014 6:26:00 AM

a nice victory ride, Faye, Congrats. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/10/2014 5:42:00 AM

Full of sentiments, congrats on the win, Faye

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2014 6:58:00 PM

wow, you are putting many of us to shame delivering one like this. VERY good stuff. I hope Sandy replies to you!!

Keith Merritt

Date: 8/6/2014 1:01:00 PM

I love the scenery and sentiment. And the title is really good . Nice, Faye !