Cloud - Andaree

The shape-shifting wonders filling out the sky
Smoothly change in the blink of an eye.
Beast. Creatures. Flowers or crowd...
Some drape like a shroud.
And every
Cloud
The very
Sky promotes them proud.
To our ears, their rain sounds loud.
Clouds fill us with awe as they pass by -
The shape-shifting wonders filling out the sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations. What a wonderful  "Cloud - Andaree" write. Have a great day with your win...................
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 8:39 AM
This was very nicely rhymed and put together. Thanks for entering my contest congrats on a podium win
Scragg Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Thank you Andrea. It was a very unique form to try. Helps us to get our little grey cells into gear. Thank you for setting the contest. :-D warm wishes .
Bowring Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 8:20 AM
Dear Natasha, I so enjoyed reading your poem. Love the images as the sky is filled with them. I’ve always found clouds to be fascinating looking at the different shapes. They are wonders indeed. This is a new form to me and you have created a really lovely poem. Thank you for sharing and inspiring. :):)
Scragg Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 10:00 AM
Thank you Christina. It was new to me too. Getting the count right was a bit of a challenge especially when the mind wants to phrase things a certain way. But it was a fun one to try :-D warm wishes :-D
Meadows Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 1:48 PM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Scragg Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 3:10 PM
Thank you Jeanette:-D
Healey Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 1:10 PM
Beautiful imagery, Natasha. i have also just written an Andaree, but it is a pale attempt compared to yours! Well done. Cheers! Jim
Scragg Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 3:05 PM
Hi Jim thank you for your kind feedback. This was quite a challenging one to write as there were multiple things to think about. It's always good for us to stretch out boundaries and have a go at something new. :-D
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