Cloud 9

Cloud 9 can be a lonely place
So much time and so much space

If only you would visit now and then
My time would be worth the loneliness I've spent

It's a bitter sweet kind of bliss
surrounded by clouds, and sunshine, and beauty...
But you're not here to spend it with me

So you see, cloud 9 can be a sad place
If sitting alone, by yourself is the case
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foulk Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 8:34 PM
yes it can get pretty lonely up there on that cloud, until your together again. a touching poem.
Smith Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 4:28 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
Brown Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 12:23 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Sarah. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
Tacito Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 6:44 AM
I can only give you a big virtual *hug*. I know these feelings too well. This hit hard.
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