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Raindrops fall from the sky as clouds come in. He waits for the rain to stop, but it keeps going. No sunshine in sight to dry up the ground. So he walks in the rain getting soaked by each raindrop. Then a sudden pain hits his heart trying to break him, But then he sees a girl ready to help him. The feeling goes away and a rainbow is visible. Their is hope now even though it didn't feel like it a while ago.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/14/2012 8:24:00 PM
Very enjoyable read keep writing
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Date: 9/13/2012 8:13:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup, Christina! I enjoyed your poem and agree with Lee, it's a wonderful free verse. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 9/9/2012 9:52:00 PM
Very nice, and I'd say this is free verse, have a check on the poetry form site at left bottom of this website.
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