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I had a big cloud in my sky a very dark cloud blocking my sight I couldn't see the sun I couldn't see the light I couldn't see the path for my life... I had a big cloud but then it rained and the water washed the darkness away down went the black down went the pain back came my sun on your face. Jessica

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Date: 9/24/2023 1:54:00 PM
Well, coulda been worse. You coulda been struck by lightning. Nice poem. Kaboom
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Jessica Carrasco
Date: 9/24/2023 6:17:00 PM
hahaha...certainly, a lightening could have been far worst...

Book: Shattered Sighs