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Cloud

I had a big cloud
in my sky
a very dark cloud
blocking my sight
I couldn't see the sun
I couldn't see the light
I couldn't see the path
for my life...

I had a big cloud
but then it rained
and the water washed
the darkness away
down went the black
down went the pain
back came my sun
on your face.

Jessica

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Date: 9/24/2023 1:54:00 PM
Well, coulda been worse. You coulda been struck by lightning. Nice poem. Kaboom
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Jessica Carrasco
Date: 9/24/2023 6:17:00 PM
hahaha...certainly, a lightening could have been far worst...

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