Cloud

cumulus there dazzlingly bright
      floats above  in motionless flight
              teases, slow-dances furtively
                          deep skies of lapis lazuli!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 19, 2009 at 8:47 AM
Beautiful... Lapis is such a deep shade of blue... this line brings so much depth to this write. It is indicative of the depth of the writers soul. I love the vivid image this piece created in my mind. It brings back memories of laying back on the lawn as a child and picking out shapes and pictures in the painted skies above. Lovely write. Smiles from Lolita
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March 19, 2009 at 7:00 AM
wonderful writing... the rhyme in the end is weird but lovely... and i love the 'teases...' line its reminds school to me! ~ Arany
Swanson Avatar
March 19, 2009 at 5:39 AM
Beautiful with rich and lovely images! I love "deep skies of lapis lazuli", a true poet's painting written with artful words. :) Love, Amy
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March 19, 2009 at 4:43 AM
Well written, with fine couplet rhyming and flow... BRAVO Romeo! Best wishes, Keith
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