Clothe Me In Grays of Pain

Clothe me in grays of pain!
Dead sun's ember
cannot warm a heart cold
with detachment.
Solitude, closest friend,
you remember
the days I walked life's road
with contentment.

Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright, August 20, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/1/2015 11:41:00 PM
nice win... SKAT
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Date: 8/31/2015 11:46:00 AM
Well done Faye! You combined both visuals with an excellent dose of creativity. #7 Congratulations on your top win! // paul
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Date: 8/30/2015 6:08:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Faye:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/30/2015 12:47:00 AM
Congrats on a very lovely first place win with this eloquent write Faye!
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Date: 8/29/2015 10:14:00 PM
It's so good to be seeing more poems of yours lately. You are one of my fave poets at Soup. Congrats on your top win. I just knew this would score big.
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Date: 8/29/2015 7:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this entry,well done
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Date: 8/21/2015 2:38:00 AM
beautiful interpretation of the images good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/20/2015 6:44:00 PM
Very nicely done, Faye. I think you sure got the essence of it!
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