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Clothe Me In Grays of Pain

Clothe me in grays of pain! Dead sun's ember cannot warm a heart cold with detachment. Solitude, closest friend, you remember the days I walked life's road with contentment. Faye Lanham Gibson Copyright, August 20, 2015

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Skat A

Date: 9/1/2015 11:41:00 PM

nice win... SKAT

Paul Callus

Date: 8/31/2015 11:46:00 AM

Well done Faye! You combined both visuals with an excellent dose of creativity. #7 Congratulations on your top win! // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 8/30/2015 6:08:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Faye:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/30/2015 12:47:00 AM

Congrats on a very lovely first place win with this eloquent write Faye!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2015 10:14:00 PM

It's so good to be seeing more poems of yours lately. You are one of my fave poets at Soup. Congrats on your top win. I just knew this would score big.

Greg Hoffman

Date: 8/29/2015 7:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win with this entry,well done

Jan Allison

Date: 8/21/2015 2:38:00 AM

beautiful interpretation of the images good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2015 6:44:00 PM

Very nicely done, Faye. I think you sure got the essence of it!